Résumé anglais 1ere

Pq tu ne pourrais pas le montrer à un prof? Ils sont là pour ça et personnellement, toujours ouvert pour nous aider / corriger des exercices supplémentaires

grayday non je ne peux vraiment pas :/

voici mon premier essai
vous en pensez quoi?

The main character is a 12-year-old named Rekha Kalindi who is popular in her village but also around because she refused to get married. She lives in poor conditions, in a tribe where girls are traditionally married at the age of 12. In spite of her sister's experience, her parents wanted her to get married but she prefers study. They finally accept thanks to her friend. Chirld marriage, teenage pregnancy and motherhood are big problems in India ans affect particulary unliteracy women.

je trouve que j'ai trop de répétitions et peu de mot de liaisons... Comment puis-je faire?

emilieriding

Salut Emilie!

J'ai fait quelque des petits corrections, j'espère que c'est bien! Je parle couramment en anglaise donc n'hésitez pas me contacter si vous avez des questions

This article is about a 12 year old girl named Rekha Kalindi, she is popular in her village and her story is also known around India because she refused to get married. She lives in poor conditions and is part of a tribe where girls are traditionally married at the age of 12. In spite of her sister's negative experience after marrying at age 12, her parents wanted Rekha to get married but she refused because she wants to study. Thanks to her teacher her parents finally accepted this. Child marriage, teenage pregnancy and young motherhood are big problems in India and affect in particular women with less education.

Bonne chance!

niamhers merci beaucoup pour ton aide :)

Si d autres veulent s entraîner on peut le faire ensemble ici ! ^^

emilieriding
Si tu veux t'entrainer en Anglais hésite pas je passe mon concours pour etre prof d'anglais l'an prochain ! :)