coucou, j'ai besoin de vos avis pour mon oral d’anglais sur "myths and heroes"
cela vous semble t-il correct quoique je trouve cela trop long..Il manque juste la conclusion.
I'm going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
Since a long time, heroes are admired for their courage, noble qualities or their achievements... Also, they are an object of extreme devotion and admiration, heroes are us role models.
For example, the sport world permits to reveal heroes and make them icons.
But, how heroes are born and how do they influence our society? In a first part, we will present the sport's world's values thanks to the queen's speech in 2010 (twenty ten), in a first part, we will show how a hero is born and why he fascine us in the story of Bethany Hamilton. At last, we will see that sport world can cause them their fall in the story of 2 fallen heroes.
Sport permits to surpass oneself and compete against others. The OG represents the + values of sport. In fact, in her speech, Queen Elizabeth shows that sport creating harmony, developing a + team spirit, helping people to rehabilitate and encouraging them to be at their best.
These people inspiring respect and they're heroes of today, sport is beneficial for al people.
However, sport permits also allow making ordinary people heroes. It's the remarquable story of Bethany, a young woman with a promising future who's surfing when she lost her balance and was attacked by a tiger-shark, which tears her left arm. She was 13 but this story of a cruel luck and incredible courage permits her, thanks to her courage and passion, to continue her career and today, she competes alongside able-bodied surfers.
This woman is a role model for many young people and inspires them to believe in his dreams.
Beyond to create heroes and inculcate values, the sport world can be fatal for many athletes. If disabled athletes inspire us respect, the sport can cause their fall. The sport world is a juicy business pushing athletes to end.
For ex, the younger tennis start, Jenifer Capriati, lost and upset by media pressure, she has lost many matches during this slump; she was arrested for shoplifting and for possession of marijuana. Or Oscar Pistorius, The Blade Runner, a role model for many Africans established many records but when he killed his wife, a long trial is initiated and he was acquitted.
For many sport heroes, the pressure of this terrible world is fatal and role models image will never be the same, they're just fallen heroes.
bon courage
) par contre contrairement à toi je trouve ce que tu as écrit trop court, mes notions (spaces and exchanges et myths and heroes) font une feuille simple recto-verso et ma prof m'a dit que je pouvais encore plus développer.
L'auteur de ce sujet l'a marqué par des "Post-It".
