bonjour à tous! j'ai une rédac d'anglais mais j'ai des doutes sur le sens de certaines phrases et de nombreuses fautent ponctuent le devoir...
quelqu'un pour me filer un coup de pouce et me donner son avis sur le devoir?
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1 Can one give too much importance to physical appearance?
In one hand, I think that today people pay too much attention to appearance. In fact, "the first impression is often the right" and people rely on what we release, physical appearance being the first thing they see. Physical appearance makes other have a certain image of us, good or bad. For example, for a maintains recruiting, we emphasizes to release a good impression. Our appearance allows us to differentiate ourselves from others and expose our tastes and personality in the eyes of another. However, pay attention to the physical can be too bad...
Indeed, be different from other leads us to "classify" as our wealth, our skin color ... The differences are marked and some people will be better than those who do not fit the "norm" and today the people who are" different" are rejected.
It can happen to us all to criticize or judge on physical appearance but these people "different", once we can know them, they bring us a lot because we attach importance to their personality and their intelligence reflect what they really are.
Also, we should stop to give importance to the physical appearance because the personality should be more important than the physical. We should learning to know the person before criticize. And we must fight against this superficial world.
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